I want to redraw a doodle manga because
it's serious characters and story line doesnt
fit the funny looking action/battle scenes
so i change the story from pure action into
action/comedy.

HERE'S THE CHANGE IN MY STORY AND SCRIPT:

Rue and his "Cat" familiar Nietzche
is heading to the capital of
Bolzurg, ezell... but they found there
selves Lost in the road of Aester...

Rue: Hey Nietzche, do u really know where we going?
Nietzche: Can't you just thrust your own familiar?
Rue: Oh no, don't tell me you're predicting again!?

Trivia: Familiars are 30% sure of it's prediction
than it's own master.

Nietzche: Honestly yes, but im afraid to say that im
30% not sure.
Rue: What!? Nietzche! that is to much!?
Nietzche: -giggle- Just kidding Master! make it 15%
Rue: *exag* Im so glad. You made me worried for a second.

-RUSTLE!,RUSTLE-

Rue: Huh?

-Rustling continues-

Nietzche: what's the matter Master Rue?
Rue: Hush! i heared something.

-.......-

-Rue draws his sword-

Rue: On your guard! Monsters comming!
Nietzche: WHAT!?

-BATTLE: a group of slime appeared! (7)-

Rue: Nietzche! stay back! a man should protect the woman!
-Fire ball suddenly appeared -

~4 slimes where burned and defeated~
-3 more slimes remaining-

Rue: Nietzche! what do you think you're doing!?
Nietzche: (cat ear is present) -question marks_-
Blasting them to bits.

TRIVIA: In combat, a familiar must return in it's true
form to unleash it's full potential in battle.
In Nietzche's situation, Showing her Cat ears is enough
to unleash enogh power to blow up the SLIMES.

TRIVIA: a FAMILIAR is powerful in it's master's weakest
STAT. In Rue and Nietzche's situation, Rue is more
physical powerful but weak in MAGIC Skill, that's
why Nietzche is more applicable in Magic using.


Rue: That's not what im trying to say!
Nietzche: eh??
Rue: *SIGH* nevermind, Let me have the remaining three

-Rue ATTACKS!-

Rue: Take this!
-HAH!
-YAHH!

~the remaining SLIMES(3) was defeated!
The group of SLIMES was defeated! RUE's PARTY WON
THE BATTLE! ~

-while desplaying the "new" STATS-

Rue: HAH! weaklings! did you see my flawless moves
Nietzche?
Nietzche: Hmmm, i can finish them in only 1 turn, by my
FIREBALL.
Rue: Oh jeez, that's why sometimes i think i was wrong
for picking swordsman as my job

TRIVIA: Swordsman are physically strong but it can only attack
one monster per turn, unlike spellcasters like Nietzche
that can attack several monsters in one turn. plus, it's
ELEMENTAL!

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Right now im working with two artworks.
One is the third member of yellowstar, Yep!
im trying to redraw it too! because she doesnt look fem enough
and the other one is a request.
so this redraw idea will take a while, or i can ask my friend
to redraw it for me.

My Enrichment class/Advance study
is killing alot of my free time!
that's why im having a hard time
bringing my ideas to reality


---GOSH! good luck to me!!